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Практический раздел: для изучающих языки, помощь студентам => Английский язык => Тема начата: Askhsiv от февраля 17, 2009, 14:54

Название: Проверьте пожалуйста небольшое CV на наличие ошибок
Отправлено: Askhsiv от февраля 17, 2009, 14:54
думаю тут полно ошибок, а с ними отправлять заранее провальная идея


Objective

Position of web developer


Relevant experience and skills

- Creation of sites with the use of different programming languages
- Development and support of databases
- Development of Content Management Systems


Employment history

Company OSP – 06.2008-01.2009
- Creation of the sites using CakePHP framework.
- Creation of the sites based on CMS Joomla (development of components, modules and templates)

Skills used: HTML, XML, CSS, PHP, CakePHP, JavaScript, AJAX, JQuery, MySQL

Freelance work - 08.2007–06.2008
- Making sites
- Development of design for sites

Skills used: HTML, CSS, PHP, JavaScript, MySQL


Additional experience

- It support
- Network administration
- Administration of sites
- Writing of articles and reviews
- Creation/editing of graphic/audio/video


Spoken languages

- Literary Russian
- Technical English
Название: Проверьте пожалуйста небольшое CV на наличие ошибок
Отправлено: iopq от февраля 18, 2009, 14:12
Цитировать- Creation of sites with the use of different programming languages
List them, that's awefully vague (HTML, CSS, etc.)
Цитировать- Development and support of databases
- Development of Content Management Systems
Again, specify which ones
ЦитироватьFreelance work - 08.2007–06.2008
- Making sites
- Development of design for sites
List some sites, maybe? Unless there are too many to list. You could choose to mention some and write "and others" since that's a lot more convincing.
Цитировать- It support
It means "оно" you should write IT since it's an abbreviation
Цитировать- Creation/editing of graphic
I'd say "images" or "graphics" since graphic is singular so it sounds like you just made one :)
but audio/video is fine

I'd say other than those two mistakes your English is solid. But your CV should have a lot more specific detail.