Оцените качество перевода (английский)

[sergey92]

Для своего сайта заказал статью на английском языке.  Т.к. сам не владею прошу оценить знатоков грамматику, стиль и т.д., что бы не стыдно было после публикации.

People love their pets – there is no doubt in that. Some owners try to keep their beloved animals from any danger whatsoever; some are dedicated to training them to participate in and be winners of a countless number of different animal shows and competitions; yet some love investing in their pets' physical and emotional appearance and health by spending tons of money on animal spas, grooming, luxurious food, clothing, accessories, and pet entertainment. Some things that people do to their animals can surprise a lot of people. Dressing the animals up, making them wear sunglasses and hats for the photos, buying them jewelry, and painting their claws with nail polish are just some examples of how people can show their love to their pets. But there are some owners whose actions make your eyebrows rise. For a long time now, a photo of a kitten painted in the yellow-black-and-red colors of a Japanese cartoon character called Pikachu was all around the Internet. It later turned out that the photo was altered in Photoshop, meaning that the kitten was not actually painted in different colors for the amusement of its owners but simply had its photo taken and then artificially colored with the use of the Photoshop software.
Who and why would want to spend their time on this whole process of altering a kitten's photo to make it look like a Pikachu Pokemon? Apparently, a lot of people found it very amusing to talk about this photo and share it with their friends and relatives via email, blogs, and social media websites. What can we say? We are glad that the kitten was not actually colored and that people who colored its photo in Photoshop made many people smile when looking at it.

[Lodur]

Вроде, вполне достойно. Меня всего одно предложение немножко напрягло:

But there are some owners whose actions make your eyebrows rise.

Но вы не разместили оригинал, поэтому трудно сказать: может, оно именно так и должно звучать в переводе.

[Hellerick]

there is no doubt in that.

Вроде бы, обычно говорят «there is no doubt about that».

[Lodur]

there is no doubt in that

Вроде бы, обычно говорят «there is no doubt about that».

Последние два слова вообще легко выкидываются без потери смысла — редкий случай в английском.

[Hellerick]

there is no doubt in that

Вроде бы, обычно говорят «there is no doubt about that».

Последние два слова вообще легко выкидываются без потери смысла — редкий случай в английском.

Более того, первые два тоже легко выкидываются.