Резюме на английском. Очень нужна Ваша критика!

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Знания английского не очень хорошее, но понадобилось написать резюме и пришлось покопаться в словарях . Пожалуйста, выразите свою критику и предложения, это очень важное, т.к. ничего хуже резюме на с ошибками быть не может)) Заранее благодарна!

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Personal Details   Date of birth: July 14, 1989 Marital status: not married

Professional Experience   
May 2012 – Present
Managing Director
Lake Silver Spring, //co.ltd (Thailand)
Responsible for the day-to day running of the business with a particular emphasis on sales and business development. Making sure that the business continues to grow byway of developing new clients whilst maintaining its existing customer base.
   
August 2009 – October 2011
OAO Remontno- ekspluatatsionnoe upravlenie (OAO REU) (Russia)
Deputy Head of Logistics Department
General administrative matters, responsible for transport and supply in construction industry, CRM, Organization of sustainable procurement, Holding of tenders for modernize pipeline systems, Organization of sustainable procurement, Buisness trips
Logistics Manager
Developing  sourcing Packages, Control supplier service level, Holding of tenders for modernize the pipeline systems, Organization of freight traffiс, Intense communications with head office, supply contractors offices and transporting companies offices on points of ordering and shipments

Employment During School   
September 2008 – July 2009
OOO Status (Russia)
Lowyer Assistant
Prepared simple to moderately complex legal documents, briefs, contracts, agreements, pleadings, and court papers and correspondence. Created and maintained a litigation database and hard copy filing system
   
May 2007 – August 2008
GK 1C-Forus (Russia)
IT Training Department Assistant
Support the training department of the organization and ensure smooth execution of departmental functions

Education   Master of Commerce and Logistics, Faculty of Commerce and Logistics,                 Baikal National University of Economics and Law, Irkutsk, Russia, 2011

Additional Education   Lawyer (incomplete), Faculty of Law,                                                                                      Baikal National University of Economics and Law, Irkutsk, Russia, 2011
Key Skills   Ability to take initiative and work independently under minimum supervision. Excellent communication skills that allow to converse with associates on all levels. Capability of managing confidential data of the organization and maintain secrecy regarding sensitive issues. Highly skillful at grasping new things and adapting to changes
Languages: native Russian, working knowledge of English
Computer skills: Microsoft Office (Word, Exel, Outlook, Access, Power Point) , 1C
References   References are available on request